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January 9th, 2010, 05:23 AM #1Slap Happy description writing
While editing an old site i ran across this description.
"Tired of eyeballs running wild all over the neighborhood?" WTF? ... I finished reading
"Then add this eye-catching weathervane! This small horse weathervane is 2 feet high..."
I can just picture a weathervane with bloody eyeballs stuck to it.
Hours of writing descriptions can make ya a little slap happy and you just write the first thing that pops into your head. Well that's my excuse and I'm sticking with it.
Anyone else suffer from this malady?
January 9th, 2010, 08:26 AM #2
I had to read that a couple of times before I got it.
January 9th, 2010, 08:50 AM #3Originally Posted by RemodelingGuy
January 9th, 2010, 09:04 AM #4Originally Posted by Mack
"Then add this eye-catching weathervane!
No more eyeballs running rampant.....
January 9th, 2010, 09:09 AM #5Originally Posted by RemodelingGuy
I'd be willing to bet it's a very unique description that won't get hit with a duplicate penalty any time soon.
January 9th, 2010, 09:39 AM #6
Wazzup with that? Makes perfect sense to me - and I understand the analogy (I think). Waaaaay back in high school they would have loved that in Creative Writing class.
January 10th, 2010, 06:17 PM #7
Perhaps you were shopping at woot.com when writing the descriptions.
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