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    Any Thoughts On This Landing Page
    I just made this landing page so I was wondering if you guys have any thoughts/suggestions?

    Any advice would help.

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    2 things.
    First, this would be better placed in the reviews section of the forum.
    Second ... a link would help.
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    I think it's a nice landing page. Would lose the hula dancers animated gif tho. Don't get me wrong, I like it, I really like it but it has nothing to do with the topic.

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    I'd love to help, but I still dont know where the link is...

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    Not enough content on the page. It's blank.

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    where's the link or am I missing something

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    I like the hula dancers. I think they fit in nicely.

    But I don't like the garish colors. I prefer plain dark text on a light background.
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    Ohh I get it now.

    I think the image of the Camel Toe may offend some

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    Your landing page is great I'm sure it will convert great.

    I would add more call to action statements, and a little bit more content.
    And we need more hula dancers! This way it will attract the attention of your visitors. They will never want to leave your website!

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    Guess I'm missing something
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    isn't and die to find out there is.

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    Quote Originally Posted by visitourmall
    Guess I'm missing something
    Not really!

    Just google his cognomen. ;-) Results 1 - 10 of about 195 for ...

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    Is that Camel Toe or is that Hula Dancer just happy to see me come to this landing page?

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    guess the link would help..
    take a look at www.xbox360-fix.com.

    let me know what you think.

    thanks

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    At a quick glance I noticed at least 6 typos. And no hula dancers.
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    Donna, so your saying hula dancers r always needed for a landing page??? And don't know there r no such thing as typos these days, they are differently spelled words or order-challenged letters.
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    I liked it better with the hula dancers .....

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    what site are you guys talking about with the hula dancers?

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    Quote Originally Posted by oranges
    Donna, so your saying hula dancers r always needed for a landing page???
    Of course. I have them on all my landing pages. don't you?
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    Quote Originally Posted by mweidner2782
    what site are you guys talking about with the hula dancers?
    I don't understand why people are talking about hula dancers.
    Some of your promises seem "pie in the sky" -- maybe that's where the dream hula dancers come in?

    Some members are wary of e-book "scams" -- your site does not appear to be an affiliate site. Most of us are here to learn more about creating affiliate sites.
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    "maybe that's where the dream hula dancers come in?"

    I believe they come from Hawaii.

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    "Cancel" ?
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    Its kinda emptyish and too long at the same time, if that makes any sense... Its missing something - I'll let you know when I realize what it is

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